looking up at the stars....
wondering why are some so close
and why some so far apart.
All stars are scintillating very brightly
looking sui similar to each other,
later I recalled that some of them are planets and celestial bodies
ironically not even distant brothers.
I am gazing up in the sky.......
This epoch has passed,
Now in the broad daylight,
I am seeing the landscape, hills and mountains,
how one is subjected to drills and one ensuing natural fountains.
I am seeing the landscape, hills and mountains.....
How tall pieces of rock constitute the peaks,
while flat ones pave way to ground
at one we have esse null,
while on other life very much buzzing around.
I am seeing the landscape, hills and mountains......
As more time has elapsed
Now I am diving deep into the waters.....
How boundless is the ocean,
home to various ecosystems..as if making relations to the blood,
but once you cross the limit of aggravating it,
It flares up tsunamis and floods.
Lets dive into the waters.............
Blue, green are the colors of water my eyes perceive
but I ultimately remembered that
water is eventually colorless,
and the colors I see are nature's deceit.
Lets dive into the waters.............
Now summing the three domains up....
The sun in the sky, flashing light in cornucopia
tells us to stay enlightened and come out of scotopia..........
The green grass waving to the song of air,
as if it is telling us to stay away from all the rueful and despair.......
The deep waters themselves having land of their own
shows how humans have internally so much energy and hidden talents sown.....
The three domains so different from each other, yet perdure to be integrated
IN THE POEM I HAVE PRESENTED MY VISION OF THE SIMILARITY IN THE HUMAN BEHAVIOUR AN THE THREE DOMAINS OF UNIVERSE (SKY, LAND, AND WATER).
The stars in the sky present in constellations are close to each other while some are very far distant from each other showing the human behavior how we are so are becoming more coming together with technology but still getting isolated.
The high mountains having null vegetation shows that the higher you have negative emotions, the more you are going to feel the void and the flat ground depicts that the grounder you are the more you are approachable and adored.
Coming to the oceans, the ocean is so vast, that it is home to varied and rich biodiversity representing a person having a pure heart that he is available for everyone . But if you harm them time and again ultimately a time will come when the person wont tolerate it and you may lose him.
The parallel that I have drawn is something which I have seen and felt.
Do tell me how you think about it and share your opinions in the comment box.
THANK YOU
ADITI VERMA.
The way you have compared these three fundamental units of our universe (sky, land and water) with our life is incredible........the hidden meaning in this poem was amazing 👍.......keep going......waiting for your another poem.
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